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Вот мысль поэта как стрела
пока летит она умна
но только блядь подует ветер,
так начинается хуйня

[A king of nothing]

It’s the most beautiful day I’ve lived
From morning sun till friendly dusk
I stood alone and thought of past
Expecting forever to let me go once more
So I could hold you closer as before…

And sun rains through dusty clouds
To my grave on mountain crown
A king of nothing there I sleep
In cold with torn and bloody chest

Feeling how mortals waste their life
I believe I’ve lost it once and for all
And alone I hear the song of wind
He sings about my broken wings
He sings about my stolen heart…

And sun rains through dusty clouds
To my grave on mountain crown
A king of nothing there I sleep
In cold with torn and bloody chest

Screaming, believing I just want her back
With my heart in her hand
So again I’ll feel complete even if she’ll fade with wind…

Wuthering wind crosses the ridge
And to midnight time has reached
A king of nothing there I sleep
In cold with torn and bloody chest…


[Reverse reality]

The riddles inside are tearing my soul
And I cannot rest from signs on the wall
I’m like a madman on a needle
I hunt for more but I don’t need it

I am a shelter for my hell
With each new doze I bring more pain
And mists in white are flying round
When tears of blood are falling down

Captured faces on the wall
With bleeding eyes they laugh and moan
And there’s no answer to my call
When veins are burning from it all

I am a shelter for my hell
With each new doze I bring more pain
And mists in white are flying round
When tears of blood are falling down

The distant light is fading down
I’m slowly killing my own world
For just another piece of heaven
That in the end will turn me devil
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